[b]Yes, you're in Love.[/b]

archdoinky SG

Penned by a stranger, written with care
As the words unfold, like rubies rare
Poetic by nature, its meaning discreet
Intentions as pure as honey is sweet

In love or out, as passion it stands,
Reads like a play, a monologue planned,
As such that happens takes you by surprise,
Neither prepared, neither wise.

The feeling that comes from a heart so true,
Bear witness to this love renew,
From a boy of charm, of intelligence and romance
Who prays day by day to be given a chance

To appreciate how special you truly are
Like a diamond in the rough, like an amorous star
Or like a flower in bloom, like a rainbow arc
Like rain upon sand, like a shimmer in the dark.

Yet, doubts still remain, as stubborn as it seems
Oh, could it be just an impossible dream?
Then do choose to awake your soul at rest
For truly, with eyes opened, you are much blessed

Showered with a love that only friends could possess
From friendship to courtship and words to impress
And hence will spark a relationship so real,
Only then do the intentions really reveal.

The smile upon your faces says much than you both know
So why stop at expressions? Why not just let it show?
Its only when you accept this gift thats sent from up above
That you realize beyond doubts,

Without question,
That yes, youre in love.

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DeadPoet SG

Very, very nice. Beautifully written. The more I read the more I like it.

Haha, Kitty got competitor liao. Mr. Green

By the way, if this poem is written by you, please do a short introduction.

Thank you.

archdoinky SG

Nurzatiman Bin Mohamed Astha, Male, 19 years old, 29th May 1984, Digs anything band, Hates people who are insecure, Helps people who are insecure, Defines logic, Muslim, Organises too much, Follow too little, carries a 3200, X-Limited, Polo Ralph Blue, Polo Ralph Sport, High Fashion, Makeover stylist, Feast on happiness, Never bear grudges to good friends, Misunderstood, Lyricist, Band instructor, Makes a killer Pasta sauce, Eye for detail, metrosexual, Gunk on head is L'oreal Out of Bed Fibre Putty, Insensitive to tears, Secrets bearer, Unassuming, Uncompromising, Tactful, Blunt, Finding romance, Logical, Line dancer, Clarinetist, Fierce, Romantic.

Hmmm... Is that enough for a short introduction? Or did I go over the word limit for worldwide introductory system. Haha.

AdAptAliS SG

Wink

archdoinky SG

Hi Adaptalis.. Yr signature somehow sounds strangely familiar.. Mr. Green

DeadPoet SG

You a Scorpio or Cancer? Maybe Aries too?

Thanks for the introduction. Actually I am talking about an introduction to the poem. Mr. Green

DeadPoet SG

Ops, 29 May Taurus. Mr. Green

AdAptAliS SG

Razz

archdoinky SG

Hmm.. 29th May makes me a Gemini. The Twins! =D

This poem is inspired by a friend who fall for this girl who knows that something's going on, but is too shy to proceed with the next step. I wrote the poem for them to bridge what they had to express to each other.

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heyyy!
we both r metro and we both make a killer pasta sauce!
welllll ok my sauce ain't exactly killer but its pretty yummy... at least thats wad they said at e pot luck. Embarassed

DeadPoet SG

Ops x2. Embarassed

I really need to get some sleep liao.

~DP blames his ignorance for astrology on not getting enough sleep~ Mr. Green

DeadPoet SG

D/post

DeadPoet SG

OMG Shocked D/post again!

[email protected] SG

29th May!!!!!!!
Shocked
my ex's bday...
Crying or Very sad

archdoinky SG

Haha. My pasta sauce is way too spicy. According to a friend, it's so fiery, you can feel e aura of spiciness around the mouth. Haha.

So, Heng, any comments about my poem?

[email protected] SG

hmm.... its very soulful...

heh as for my pasta sauce, its not spicy, but its really cheesy n chunky, more european style.
they liked e way the morz cheese melts n creates long sticky strands. turns 'em on all e time.

[ r 0 y s t 0 n ] SG

Okay, I was like WOAH when I saw u here.. But anyways.. Yo!!Haha.. Laughing

archdoinky SG

Right.. Haha. Hi Roy. Wink

DeadPoet SG

You guys know each other???

archdoinky SG

Haha. I assumed his name is Roy by looking at his nick… It is Roy right?